Zeego

i ain't sure of people will like this but i need someone to read it and tell me if they like it or not. i will try to write a chapter every week.

Zeego
chapter 1 The box

"There's no such think as magic." that's what they all say. "Fantacy is just a lie that kids bleave in."
Ha ha i laugh at them! i'v seen magic with my own two eyes! but it's nothing like they think. in fact it's the exact opiset!
Hi i'm Jane crane. (yes my name ryames) my parence are poets. or well at least half the time. the rest of the time there proffessers at the Unaversaty of Nassvill tennassee, (u.n.t) well back the the story...
you see it all started with my birthday June 11th my brother (Blaine Crane) was taking me to the mall because he forgot to get me a birthday presant like he dose every year. but this year was diffrent. Blaine was taking me to a little corner store called fabu! it opened up last week.
I walked around the julry section about 30 times and the clothes section 40 times. nothing in this store was very apeling to me. I finaly dicited to look at the old people stuff iin the back what is it clled antic? Well you know what i mean
the first thing i noticed was at box. about the size of a bread box. the reason i noticed it was because of its vibret color. wait a minute... it wasan't just one color it seamed to change....


k thats all for today gtg be back soon to finish the rest of the chapter.